江南达者童山雷 发表于 2023-7-27 00:27:29

七言绝句三首

七言绝句三首江南达者 童山雷

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溪原晚霁风束堤滩浪减频,雨余河岸气清新。残阳復艳辉金柳,夕露方滋润碧筠。附识终得以一宽一严两对成此诗。思之:仔细观察体会现世生活,严格且是合理运用格律技巧,方有望将汉字表达力渐趋极致。细想来,彼时古人写诗填词,亦应是循此原则。
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溪畔观风绿柳丝绦拂碧波,紫荆花蕊映青禾。野凫觅食沿蒲岸,衔得鱼虾羡煞鹅。

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